Project SVN Completed

Yay, after 3 long weeks the project is finally done. A normal person could have actually done it in 5 hours but you know, I have other stuff to take care of. Anyway, here it is, the product of my boredom and false belief that I’m an anime artist lol. So some stat about the VN: it has 2526 words and about 149 screens of dialogue. I used about 15 BG images, 2 sprites, 5 BGM, and 5 SFX. Of course full credits were given to my resources. It was a wonderful experience for me. I used to just leech around for free VNs (I still do) and now I’ve finally made my own.
It isn’t perfect though, half-baked you may call it, but I think the structure is already there. I’ve realized that I’ve focused more on the technical stuff of the VN. While it is equally important, I think I neglected the very backbone of the VN which is the story. I think my story is still too weak. Thanks to my editor, I was able make it a bit readable. Then again this is my first time so I hope that excuses me lol.
PS. I already sent copies to Coeli, AS, Lanie-emon, & Setsuna-san who all requested a copy earlier.
Edit 3/3/08:
I’m now providing direct links to the SVN thanks to Pytom’s encouragement & support. For those who do not know, Pytom is the creator of the famous Renpy VN engine. Thanks for tips!^^ So sorry for all the hassle, I didn’t expect that visitors other than the regular commentators on this blog would really be interested in reading this. Anyway here it is, happy reading. Feel free to post your comments ad suggestions ^^
Versions:
*a minor bug: there’s a portion where the text window expands if the text is too large. Pytom recommended a short script to fix it but it is not yet included in this version.
Some Comments:
AS said: I finished the game, pretty interesting and something we otaku can relate to for the main character K ^^. The only thing that I would change is being able to pick the main characters name, but I assume that you will work on it and just made it K to make it easier for you while you finish the game. Interesting twist and good sound effects ^^. Send me more when you get more done lol ^^
Shin said: Just finished playing it. You already pointed out the weaknesses yourself, so I’m not going go there. Other than that, good selection of SFX and BGM. Loved the transition between each scene, as it gave the story a proper flow ^^xxx
Reviews of the SVN are available on these blogs:


